鋪張浪費英語作文

篇一：高中英語專題寫作 學生鋪張浪費現象

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Personally, both parents and society are to blame. Materials are needed but not necessary. Parents

should teach children how to live with love but not money. Only if parents and society serve as

good models will children live a better life.

1)Personally, both parents and society are to take the responsibility.