在城市裡英語作文5年級

篇一：5,6年級上冊英語作文范文點評

5年級上冊英語作文范文點評

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all like her.

【要領點評】

這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹瞭英語老師的姓名，然後逐一介紹瞭她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。