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World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are the causes and how to solve it? (at least 250 words)

Nowadaysit has become a serious problem that the consumption of natural resources is increasing continuously in the whole world. What factors lead to this phenomenon and what can be done to solve the problem have become an issue to many people. In my view, the following reasons should be taken into consideration.