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篇一：托福寫作批改點評 第4期-關於教育的話題_托福寫作

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托福寫作批改點評 第4期:關於教育的話題_托福寫作 Topic題目):

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying.

I disagree with the statement that students can obtain a better and more efficient education if they are provided with less vacation and more time concentrating on school work. Some people may argue that more leisure time means more escape from the academic work, and students wil lforget what they learnt in school, however, I think that with more breaks,students can benefit more from the vacation rather than on campus studying.