作文:結構的重要性

篇一：雅思大作文實例點評：結構的重要性

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雅思大作文實例點評：結構的重要性

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雅思大作文寫作需要我們有一個嚴密的邏輯分析能力和歸納演繹能力，面對一個題目我們寫不好的主要原因是我們大腦中積累的漂亮英文論證素材及論據素材太少，以至於我們輸出的內容過於空洞，下面是小編為大傢搜索整理的有關雅思大作文寫作的實例點評。

There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create?There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group. Gradually, this leads to not revere (這是啥意思?! lead to 後面接 doing !) the elderly people in diverse conditions. Yet in my opinion, instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure (這句話本身就有點變扭，感覺很怪!) . But, what causes the promble? Here i give two major reasons (這句太廢話瞭，把兩個理由總結一下，寫出來會比較好) .