大學英語作文批改網

篇一：批改網英語作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Please give the old more concern and love

In the picture above,an old lady is sitting in front of the mirror alone,saying ‘my son is busy with his job and grandson is taking classes,leaving me home lonely.’