英語作文在線修改

篇一：考研英語寫作在線修改練習及作文點評——團結就是力量

【寫作原文】

In this vivid picture,a big stone was jack-up by little blades of green grass,though this looks strange.The picture means that union give strength.

It’s an obvious fact that a person’s strength is limited, the power of people is unlimited,especially when we stumble and fall. But to beat emeny we must use collective force.It has been proved in people work together to combat disaster in Sichuan earthquake .In this natural disaster, a strong unity of the Chinese people unprecedented concerted efforts of one mind, though