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I was recent told that listening to loud music is graduallymaking people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deafear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down; almost paralyze(癱) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing themout by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen tomy neighbor some day.書面表達